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entrance - no entrance

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Title     entrance - no entrance
Photographer     petri/Petri (11,882) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Buildings
Categories     Architecture
Documentary
Tourist
Lens     9-18mm Zuiko
Camera     olympus E-1
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     October 29, 2009 2:40:00 PM CDT
Views     129
Rating     3 Thumb-up

The proper museum entrance was to the right, around the corner...

Shot at 15mm(30mm), f/10.0, 1/125sec, ISO400. C&C welcome and appreciated.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lidiving/Chris (532) Send mail to this user on October 29, 2009 8:03:52 PM CDT (1) Early critique

The image is very attractive. I like the colors,textures and the composition. I do agree with the previous Critique. I does lack a focal point. I find myself in this same situation more often than I would like. You have a great background without subject.

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Thumb-up    from bbigham/Barbara (881) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on October 29, 2009 3:03:14 PM CDT (1) Early critique

An interesting shot, with beautiful subtle colors. But something is missing, some element for the eye to rest on, to become the true "subject" of the image. I could wish for a dog or person at the doorway, even a plant, something to bring it to life. As it is, it kind of just sits there, lovely but empty. Maybe a different pov would have helped - a low angle or from the side, anything rather than straight on.

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