Alina


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Title     Alina
Photographer     pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     MODELS
Category     Portrait
Camera     Sony R1
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     November 3, 2009 7:23:20 AM CST
Views     870
Rating     24 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from alextol/Alexander (421) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 2:50:48 AM CST (1)

The beautiful model, qualitative photo and emotions - all at height, but such earrings - simply distract attention, in my opinion.Regards,Alex.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from mikestephens/Mike (50,167) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 11:03:00 PM CST (3)

Yuri,

This is a SOLID 2 thumbs up in my opinion. Obviously, excellent detail and great clarity and colour.

The two things that I see that I feel detract a bit are:

1. The dark area just in her nostril.

2. The background on the right -- Doesn't seem to add anything in any way to compliment this nice shot.

Best.

mike s + +

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From pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:41:27 AM CST

Mike, thank you!

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Non-conforming thumb-up Non-conforming thumb-up Non-conforming thumb-up    from jdtx/John (280) Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 8:43:24 PM CST

Beautiful just as it is..great composition, color, texture , focus..everything works..very natural look..thanks..jdtx

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From pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:42:28 AM CST

Thank you very much, John!

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Thumb-up    from ronsard/Alec (596) Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 8:14:07 PM CST (2)

Technically perfect but without anything unique. Worse the model is giving almost none of herself. Surely she could let us have a bit more personality. She's closed off.

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From pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:44:01 AM CST

Alec, next time will try to do smth with it..., thank you

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from drunkenmaster138/Peter (660) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 4:11:31 PM CST (2)

this is a very good sharp focus photo and i like her may be smile a little bit,but this is only my opinion, .I heard sony r1 is a very good camera, the zeiss lens is incredible . what aperture did you use?.I love my sony alpha 700 camera and my favor zeiss lens 85mm and 135mm,well done.

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From pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:47:27 AM CST

Peter! Thank you - agree Sony Zeiss lens are fantastic in R1 and give very good images with any F-stop you use.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from foreverimages/David (10,959) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 7:59:54 AM CST (8)

the thumb doesn't give this image the credit it deserves. excelent clairity and and detail. the lighting is perfect as well. I'm thinking the crop is a little too tight though, excellent work.

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From pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:48:09 AM CST

David, thank you so much!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from iadm/Ignacio (108) Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 7:49:48 AM CST (8)

Nice shot. even this kind of composition is risky for a woman, this one is very well done. Good model an attitude.

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From pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:49:08 AM CST

:-) about risk - thank you very much!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from duss/Luca (616) Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 7:40:22 AM CST (7)

Portrait here is fantastic! I love the skin color that looks so natural and the cut that you did here! Nice beautiful work my friend! I saw your other portrait and they are also very good! Thank you for sharing you photos!

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From pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:50:02 AM CST

Luca - thank you for your kind words!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from sedatkisa/Sedat (37,110) Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 7:37:08 AM CST (9) Early critique

Hi Yuri, wonderful model has a nicearringe posing, beautiful eyes meanful looking, good framed portrait work where metal earring stealing the attention.drone well.Rgds.

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From pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:50:51 AM CST

Teshakjur, Sedat!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from gfhj/Gf (1,486) Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 7:36:37 AM CST (8) Early critique

Lello Yuri,beautyful shot of Alina i really like your photo and its look very clear and you done the geart job. I am new on sig please help me out.Cheers GF

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From pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:51:47 AM CST

Thank you, Gf!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from davidmccandlish/David (3,501) Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 7:33:04 AM CST (8) Early critique

This a beautiful take of your model Alina. Lovely unblemished facial look casually looking at camera. Very natural and another case of no heavy make up is always a winner.The whole emphasis is on the delightful shape of face top to bottom ,side to side. Beautiful positioning in frame. Nice. Cheers--Dave

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From pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:53:17 AM CST

Dave, thank you very much for your critique!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jazzcollector/Adam (339) Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 7:29:03 AM CST (7) Early critique

Love this shot when I can see it up close, the thumbnail doesn't do it justice. I think this is because I want an even closer crop, sounds weird but I would like to see a crop halfway between her lip and chin as well as removing most of the bokah on her right side. I think doing this will emphasis those stunning eyes.

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From pautov/Yuri (7,237) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:41:33 AM CST

Thank you very much, Adam!

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