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from maxart/Max (78,070) 
on November 4, 2009 3:37:27 AM CST
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The wheels are fun, but I am caught by the sign on the wheelchair - please talk to me, looking for 2 room.... I would have sacrificed the square format for a bit more air on the sides. ;o)-max-
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From wobex/Wolfram (242)
on November 4, 2009 3:53:42 AM CST
Thank you, Max! For me the wheels a more than fun - they are telling a story about grewing older and how different life can be. This scene changed very quickly - so there was no time for accurate framing. To be honest: This was a shot from my hip and unfortunately I left very less space at the left side. Regards, Wolfram
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from puffinlady/Jennifer (2,029) 
on November 3, 2009 5:26:08 PM CST
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A really interesting shot!! Nicely done here and for a busy photo, this really works here! Good eye on this one! Most of us would have passed this by...so good job!!
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from wampum/Curt (4,415)
on November 3, 2009 3:02:04 PM CST
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The value of every good image lies in relationships, and this image goes beyond just showing a disabled person, but sets up multiple visual relationships that help create a complex, and interesting, message. Others have made excellent comments on the technical issues in the image, and I won't repeat any of that.
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from dnd/Dnd (1,703)
on November 3, 2009 3:01:06 PM CST
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My 3TU here. I agree with a critique below but i'm not sure that all objects must be in focus. This DOF is enough to add a depth in a whole composition as well as not to ruine all lines and details.
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from bsquared/Bruce (1,207)
on November 3, 2009 2:11:13 PM CST
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Composition is a 3 TU
Choice of black and white is a 3 TU
Frame of the shot is a 3 TU
Focus (just a little fuzzy) and depth of field (all subjects are not in focus together) is is a 2 TU
Almost a full 3 Thumbs UP - but a bit short of flawless!
I enjoy the four sets of wheels - bike - stroller - tricycle and wheel chair!
Very good work!
Thanks for sharing!
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From wobex/Wolfram (242)
on November 3, 2009 2:56:39 PM CST
Thank you, Bruce! You missed one set of wheels...! Regards, Wolfram
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from czarg/George (3,289)
on November 3, 2009 1:47:49 PM CST
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Excellent capture in my opinion.. I think most people would not see the artist composition with this general subject matter - bravo! Good choice of black/white and the contrast in color AND individuals (wheels). Regards cZ
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From greeter1/Administrator (0) 
on November 4, 2009 7:58:10 AM CST
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