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angels

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Title     angels
Photographer     moric/Marko (1) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     imaginery in reality
Categories     Fine Art
Portrait
Black and White
Camera     Canon EOS 20D
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     November 7, 2009 7:36:57 AM CST
Views     412
Rating     1 Thumb-up

one photo from solo exhibition IMAGINERY IN REALITY

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Thumb-up    from orkunmungan/Orkun (764) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 9, 2009 3:30:23 PM CST (0) Early critique

Surprising to see that there is no critique on this shot. In general, the use of contrast and grey tones is successful. The idea and composition also has potential. I would for sure crop out the planted area and even the spot of land to the right of the model at the back to get the focus point concentrated and the two models will form a striking perspective. If you have a change of reshot, please try without the highly toy-like looking wings on the models or you can simply use plain cloths hanging from their neck to back, I believe it will have a better result. Cheers, Orkun

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Non-conforming thumb-up Non-conforming thumb-up Non-conforming thumb-up    from youjjin/Wojtek (240) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 8:13:30 AM CST

piece of good job. 1. project 2. climate 3. game of pls. hold so farther

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From greeter1/Administrator (0) This user is a Premium Member This user is an Administrator Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 12:21:16 PM CST

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