Smile


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Title     Smile
Photographer     gfhj/Gf (1,486) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Snapshot
Category     Snapshot
Camera     Olympus SP590uz
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     November 7, 2009 8:09:11 AM CST
Views     137
Rating     1 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from niforpix/Maciej (231) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 4:40:55 PM CST (2) Early critique

This image needs a little work. Here's what I'd recommend doing: 1. Photoshop out the reflection of the photographer (and few other people) in the sunglasses. 2. The horizon is not straight. 3. The reflection of the car (?) on the ground is distracting. I'd also try few different poses. This one doesn't seem to be too natural. A little awkward.

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From gfhj/Gf (1,486) Send mail to this user on November 8, 2009 10:06:23 AM CST

Hello Maciej,i am really happy that you critique me thanks far that.And your word very inportant far me. Once again thank ,best of regards GF

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